What went well?
- The sound really creates good affect.
- Some of the camera shots are good (Putting the cocaine into lines and the close up on the ID)
Even Better if
- If they stopped it earlier rather than putting in the sound effects.
- If the titles were more creative.
Score: 35/60
What went well?
- The camera shots were steady
- The voice over was very good and clear, plus it matched what was happening on the screen.
- The traffic noises gave a good effect when she was running
- The sound started to build as the guy got closer and closer to the girl.
Even better if
- The screen wasn't dark for 2 minutes at the end
- If they made the title's a little more interesting
Score: 50/60